Thread:3attleStar/@comment-30270234-20180627134056

If I may, I'd like to point out two or three details: 1) references always go _after_ punctuation; 2) pages are linked the first time they're mentioned in a paragraph. Only one link to loupgarou is needed, the other two or three are too many. 3) With some exeptions, characters should be referred by last (or first and last), rather than first, name. So, it's Dresden, not Harry; Molly Carpenter, not Molly, etc. An exception are children: Maggie Dresden, child, Harry Carpenter, etc., which can be referred to by first name, or when more than a character with the same surname are mentioned. Thomas and Lara Raith, any of the Carpenter family, etc. 