Thread:Ursuul/@comment-37950665-20190522211926

Most definitely overcluttered - it is essentially a long(ish) list of Dresden meeting new characters; which I'm not going to touch for a couple of days since it's late now and I'll be busy tomorrow. Hope to work on the page over the weekend, after reading the relevant Dresden-verse and Harry-chapter.

Problem is, what do we keep, and what is Dresden's story arc? What does he gets out of it that he didn't know/have when he arrives. I think we can condense the whole mess to a paragraph or two, and ignore all the new characters. We probably should keep the poisoning attempt, the consequences of breaking word with a fae(?), and the threats and tricks distributed as gifts (the athame, the attempted unmaking of Amoracchius and Bianca's biting Susan. Any other ideas? 